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PEGGED SAGA // WRITING PROGRESS REPORT

June 7, 2026

For much of the past year, I assumed the greatest challenge of Pegged would be writing the ending.

I am no longer convinced.

Over the last few weeks I have spent considerable time revisiting Act II, and the experience has changed my understanding of the book.

The ending remains difficult. But the real burden of the novel may lie elsewhere: in convincing readers that a seemingly abstract idea could become a genuine source of danger.

Act II is where that work happens.

The most significant progress since the last report has been a substantial review and restructuring pass on Act II.

The purpose was not to add new events.

It was to improve tension.

One lesson from Hitchcock is that suspense emerges when the audience understands the significance of something before the characters fully do.

Act II increasingly functions in that way.

The reader begins to understand that Pegged is not merely a protocol, a stablecoin, or a technological curiosity.

It is a proposal that quietly questions one of the oldest assumptions in political history:

somebody must decide.

Most of the work this month has been devoted to making that realization emerge gradually and naturally through the characters.

What Changed

Several revisions have focused on strengthening the distinct ways the members of the team perceive Pegged.

Alias

Alias increasingly understands the technical possibility he has discovered.

What he does not fully understand is how disruptive other people may find it.

His role has become less that of a visionary and more that of an experimenter.

He is testing something. The consequences remain uncertain.

Sofia

Sofia's perspective has become more important.

She increasingly recognizes that Pegged is not primarily a monetary system.

It is a governance problem disguised as a monetary system.

Many of the political implications become visible through her concerns.

Amara

Amara's role has also expanded.

She sees consequences before systems.

Her attention is drawn not to whether Pegged works, but to what happens if it does.

Raj

Raj continues to function as the bridge between abstract possibility and institutional reality.

Several scenes have been refined to better emphasize his understanding of incentives, power, and human behavior.

Ava

Perhaps the most important revisions concern Ava.

She increasingly becomes the reader's interpreter.

Not because she explains Pegged.

But because she recognizes that something unusual is taking shape before she can fully articulate why.


Literary Agents

I am still actively looking for a literary agent.

In some ways, the recent work on Act II has reinforced how important this step will be.

Pegged continues to sit awkwardly between categories.

It contains elements of a thriller, but it is not a conventional thriller.

It contains philosophical themes, but it is not philosophical fiction in the academic sense.

It contains technological concepts, but it is not science fiction.

Finding somebody capable of understanding that mixture remains one of the most important objectives for the project.

As always, if you know agents, editors, or publishing professionals who may be interested in ambitious and unconventional fiction, I would be delighted to hear from you.

Looking Ahead

The immediate priorities remain clear:

  • Continue refining Act II.

  • Continue drafting and tightening Act IV.

  • Advance the #peg specification.

  • Prepare the manuscript for future external readers.

The work feels slower than drafting.

But it also feels more important.

Drafting creates possibilities.

Revision decides which possibilities deserve to survive.