This year, I've joined a study group for improving various cognitions, which requires 300+ word assignments per day (non-writing group).

This most recent week's study was to read Wealth is the Realization of Cognition and give my own answers based on the questions posted. Today's question is: Why is it important to add to knowledge and subtract from mindfulness.

I had pondered over this question and wrote a 500 word answer in no time. The writing process was very fluid, but I was very aware that I had just been completely stream-of-consciousness, writing wherever I thought of writing, without a clear structure or hierarchy.

I gave the answer to chatgp and deepseek, and I wanted to see the difference between their revised version and my original version. As a result, their revised answers have clear logic and hierarchy.

deepseek's revised answers are more rounded than chatgpt's, which is in line with Chinese people's reading habits. I made a copy of deepseek's revised answer and compared it with my own, word by word and line by line, and I can see that there are some problems with my own essay: the sentences are long and complicated, and some of the contents are mixed up with each other and repetitive.

In the future, I will not pursue more words in my writing, but will pursue clarity of expression, concise language, and clear hierarchy.

This year, I've joined a study group for improving various cognitions, which requires 300+ word assignments per day (non-writing group).

This most recent week's study was to read Wealth is the Realization of Cognition and give my own answers based on the questions posted. Today's question is: Why is it important to add to knowledge and subtract from mindfulness.

I had pondered over this question and wrote a 500 word answer in no time. The writing process was very fluid, but I was very aware that I had just been completely stream-of-consciousness, writing wherever I thought of writing, without a clear structure or hierarchy.

I gave the answer to chatgp and deepseek, and I wanted to see the difference between their revised version and my original version. As a result, their revised answers have clear logic and hierarchy.

deepseek's revised answers are more rounded than chatgpt's, which is in line with Chinese people's reading habits. I made a copy of deepseek's revised answer and compared it with my own, word by word and line by line, and I can see that there are some problems with my own essay: the sentences are long and complicated, and some of the contents are mixed up with each other and repetitive.

In the future, I will not pursue more words in my writing, but will pursue clarity of expression, concise language, and clear hierarchy.