The primary school teacher asked the students to do sentence-building exercises, and the topic was "If". One student was scolded, and he wrote the sentence: "Milk is not as good as juice." This is a bold sentence - it is naughty and unruly, It fails to conform to the usual grammar, but subtly dismantles and reorganizes the possibility of literal meaning. Compared with other elementary school students who solemnly said "If I take 100 points in the test...", the author of this sentence is indeed ingenious in the assembly of words, because it is not just as casual as "I write my words". The same is true of Lu Xun's sentence "One is a jujube tree, and the other is a jujube tree" in "Autumn Night". This sentence of Lu Xun demonstrates a unique requirement at the beginning of the vernacular literature movement: the author consciously shows the observation procedure through the description procedure, so that the author's observation of the world can be accurately copied in the reader's mental image, The purpose of the description is not just to tell the reader "what to see", but "how to see it". Lu Xun's "strange and redundant" sentence is not to let the reader see the two jujube trees, but to imply that the reader will follow at an appropriate speed. The garden looked away from the wall, passed a jujube tree, passed another jujube tree, and then extended to a "strange and high" night sky.

From a sentence to an article - even a novel that "should" take storytelling as its "main business", must not give up the responsibility of "rewriting the whole world", must show the observation procedure through the description procedure, all In addition to telling the reader "what to see", it also hints at "how to see". A primary school student who was scolded in the practice of sentence making muttered in his heart: "Why can't you look at this sentence in my way? Besides, milk is not as delicious as juice!" How can we comfort this child? We can tell him: "Don't be discouraged, Lu Xun has been scolded a lot!

The primary school teacher asked the students to do sentence-building exercises, and the topic was "If". One student was scolded, and he wrote the sentence: "Milk is not as good as juice." This is a bold sentence - it is naughty and unruly, It fails to conform to the usual grammar, but subtly dismantles and reorganizes the possibility of literal meaning. Compared with other elementary school students who solemnly said "If I take 100 points in the test...", the author of this sentence is indeed ingenious in the assembly of words, because it is not just as casual as "I write my words". The same is true of Lu Xun's sentence "One is a jujube tree, and the other is a jujube tree" in "Autumn Night". This sentence of Lu Xun demonstrates a unique requirement at the beginning of the vernacular literature movement: the author consciously shows the observation procedure through the description procedure, so that the author's observation of the world can be accurately copied in the reader's mental image, The purpose of the description is not just to tell the reader "what to see", but "how to see it". Lu Xun's "strange and redundant" sentence is not to let the reader see the two jujube trees, but to imply that the reader will follow at an appropriate speed. The garden looked away from the wall, passed a jujube tree, passed another jujube tree, and then extended to a "strange and high" night sky.

From a sentence to an article - even a novel that "should" take storytelling as its "main business", must not give up the responsibility of "rewriting the whole world", must show the observation procedure through the description procedure, all In addition to telling the reader "what to see", it also hints at "how to see". A primary school student who was scolded in the practice of sentence making muttered in his heart: "Why can't you look at this sentence in my way? Besides, milk is not as delicious as juice!" How can we comfort this child? We can tell him: "Don't be discouraged, Lu Xun has been scolded a lot!