

Simplicity is hard. Most businesses don’t fail because of bad products.
They fail because people don't understand what they sell. Hence, nobody knows about them.
Not hate.
Not objections.
Not competition.
Confusion.
Confusion is the silent killer of growth.
Someone lands on your website.
They squint. They scroll.
They try to decode what you do.
Three seconds later, they leave.
Not because you’re bad, but because thinking is expensive!
And nobody wants to spend mental energy on you.
You’re too close to your own business.
You know every detail.
Every feature.
Every nuance.
So you think you’re being clear.
But you’re not.
You’re speaking fluent insider. Your customer speaks survival = time to understand.
Those are two different languages.
And survival always wins.
Here’s something most founders miss.
Your customer’s brain isn’t trying to appreciate your clever copy.
It’s trying to conserve energy.
Biologically. Literally.
Your brain burns hundreds of calories a day just processing life:
Notifications.
Traffic.
Work problems.
Family logistics.
5,000+ ads screaming for attention.
So the brain has a ruthless filter:
Does this help me survive or thrive?
No?
Ignore.
That’s it.
That’s the whole algorithm.
Not aesthetics.
Not storytelling awards.
Not brand voice.
Just:
“Is this useful to me right now?”
If the answer isn’t obvious in seconds, you’re invisible.
The smarter you are, the worse your messaging tends to be.
Because smart people over-explain.
You want to show nuance.
You want to sound sophisticated.
You want people to “get the depth.”
So you say things like:
“We build holistic ecosystems.”
“Empowering the future of digital transformation.”
“Reimagining human potential through technology.”
These sentences sound impressive.
They say nothing.
Nobody wakes up thinking:
“God, I really need holistic ecosystems today.”
People wake up thinking:
I couldn't sleep
I need more customers
My back hurts
I’m broke
I’m stressed
I’m wasting time on stupid videos
Real problems. Concrete problems. Survival problems.
If your words don’t connect to those, you lose.
After working with enough founders, you start to see the same patterns repeat.
Different industries. Same errors.
When someone asks what you do, you say: “It’s kind of hard to explain…”
That sentence alone is a red flag.
If it’s hard to explain, it’s hard to buy.
Remember simple slogan "Clarity scales." Complexity doesn’t.
Look at Amazon.
Their site is ugly.
But you buy in seconds.
Why?
Because everything screams:
what it is
what it costs
whether it’s good
how fast it arrives
No poetry. No "hard to explain.” Just a few points to make it clear why you should buy.
And that clarity prints money.
Founders love options. — Customers don’t.
You want to be known for: (this could apply to me too!)
strategy
growth
brand
community
partnerships
content
AI
Web3
consulting
coaching
Your brain says: “We’re multi-dimensional.”
Their brain: “I don’t get it.”
You only get to own one thing.
Not three.
Not five.
One.
Because memory is limited. Ask yourself:
When you think of KFC, what comes to mind? — Chicken.
Not “fast casual operational excellence ecosystem.”
Just chicken.
Simple wins.
If you only do one thing after reading this, do this.
Write one sentence.
Not a manifesto.
Not a pitch deck.
One sentence.
Here’s the structure:
I help [specific person] solve [specific problem] so they can [specific outcome].
That’s it.
No cleverness allowed.
Examples:
I help founders clarify their messaging so they can grow revenue.
I help busy professionals sleep better so they wake up focused.
I help small creators monetize their audience without ads.
Boring?
Yes!
Effective?
Extremely!
Because it answers the only question people care about:
“What’s in it for me?”
There’s a reason movies hold your attention for two hours, but websites lose you in ten seconds.
Story.
Story turns off the brain’s “ignore” filter.
Because story mirrors how we think about life.
Every good story has the same structure:
A character wants something
They face a problem
They meet a guide
The guide gives them a plan
They succeed (or fail)
That’s every movie you love.
And it’s exactly how your business should be framed.
But most founders get this backwards.
They position themselves as the hero.
Wrong move.
You’re not the hero.
You’re the guide.
Your customer is the hero!
You’re Yoda, not Luke.
Gandalf, not Frodo.
People don’t pay heroes. They pay guides.
Because guides help them win.
That's how Donald Miller frames simple “what I can help you with” story in his Story Brand book:

Stop thinking:
“How do I explain my product?”
Start thinking:
“How do I reduce thinking for my customer?”
Marketing isn’t persuasion. It’s simplification.
You’re not trying to impress. You’re trying to remove friction.
Every extra sentence is friction.
Every abstraction is friction.
Every clever metaphor is friction.
Friction kills sales.
If your business feels stuck, here’s a simple reset you can do today.
Not theory. Execution exercise to test.
Explain what you do to a 12-year-old.
If they don’t understand instantly, rewrite.
Children are brutal clarity filters.
Adults are polite and pretend to understand.
Kids don’t.
Use that.
Not for final copy, for fixing your bloated message.
Your headline should not be inspirational.
It should be obvious.
Bad:
Empowering tomorrow’s possibilities
Good:
We help freelancers get clients without cold outreach
One makes you sound smart. The other makes you money.
Choose well.
If someone remembers only one sentence about you, what should it be?
Write it.
Now delete everything that doesn’t reinforce it.
Yes, it will feel uncomfortable. That’s normal.
Focus always feels like loss.
But it’s leverage.
I know all about it. Guilty as charged. Just check Lab2094.com.
The best brands are boring on purpose.
They repeat the same message for years.
Think:
Just do it
Eat more chicken
Clarify your message
Short. Memorable. Repeatable.
You want people finishing your sentences.
Not asking what you mean.
Here’s the part most founders won’t admit.
We avoid clarity because it feels… small and limiting!
We want to sound deep.
Sophisticated.
Multi-layered.
But customers don’t reward depth.
They reward usefulness.
Being simple isn’t dumbing down.
It’s respect.
It says: “I value your time enough to make this obvious.”
Clarity is empathy.
Confusion is ego.
Here’s the upside.
Once you understand this, you gain a huge edge.
Because most people refuse to simplify.
They hide behind jargon.
You won’t.
So you instantly stand out.
Not because you’re louder.
Because you’re clearer.
And clarity feels like trust.
Trust drives revenue.
When your message is clear:
conversations get shorter
sales calls get easier
referrals increase
hiring improves
partnerships click faster
Everything compounds.
Because people finally understand what to send your way.
If they can’t explain you, they can’t refer you.
And word of mouth dies.
Clarity fuels distribution.
Distribution fuels growth.
Distribution for ideas, products, art, …
Here’s the heuristic I use for every project I work with:
If someone lands on this page for 5 seconds,
can they say what we do?
If not, it’s broken.
No exceptions.
Your business probably doesn’t need:
a rebrand
a new logo
a prettier website
more features
It needs fewer words.
Sharper words.
More honest words.
Words that connect directly to survival and progress.
Because at the end of the day, buying is simple.
People pay for things that make their lives better.
It may be — Faster. Safer. Easier.
If you can say how you do that — clearly — you win.
If you can’t, you lose.
So don’t try to sound smart.
Sound useful.
That’s the game.
And it’s winnable in a single afternoon.
Stop playing the Hero: You are the Guide. Your customer is the Hero who needs to "win the day".
The Survival Association: If your product isn't clearly tied to the user's ability to survive or thrive, they won't buy it.
Clarity over Cleverness: "Cute" marketing is a luxury for those who like being poor. Use "survival soundbites" instead.
Repeat the Soundbite: Marketing is an exercise in memorization. Use short, repeatable soundbites until they stick.
The One-Page Habit: If it doesn't fit on one page (or one canvas), it’s too complicated to scale.
I hope this gave you some hints for clearer thinking about your brand message.
Till next time, let’s build better businesses!
Pete
PS: “My name is Pete (aka BFG), and I can help you fix your distribution.😉"
(see, I learned from my own article)
Connect with me:
- on Farcaster: https://warpcast.com/bfg
- on X: https://twitter.com/aka_BFG
- on TG: https://t.me/BrightFutureGuy
- and I recommend joining BuildBetter YouTube Channel (formerly Web3 Magic): https://www.youtube.com/@Web3MagicPod
I still have a LinkedIn in case you're that old.
Simplicity is hard. Most businesses don’t fail because of bad products.
They fail because people don't understand what they sell. Hence, nobody knows about them.
Not hate.
Not objections.
Not competition.
Confusion.
Confusion is the silent killer of growth.
Someone lands on your website.
They squint. They scroll.
They try to decode what you do.
Three seconds later, they leave.
Not because you’re bad, but because thinking is expensive!
And nobody wants to spend mental energy on you.
You’re too close to your own business.
You know every detail.
Every feature.
Every nuance.
So you think you’re being clear.
But you’re not.
You’re speaking fluent insider. Your customer speaks survival = time to understand.
Those are two different languages.
And survival always wins.
Here’s something most founders miss.
Your customer’s brain isn’t trying to appreciate your clever copy.
It’s trying to conserve energy.
Biologically. Literally.
Your brain burns hundreds of calories a day just processing life:
Notifications.
Traffic.
Work problems.
Family logistics.
5,000+ ads screaming for attention.
So the brain has a ruthless filter:
Does this help me survive or thrive?
No?
Ignore.
That’s it.
That’s the whole algorithm.
Not aesthetics.
Not storytelling awards.
Not brand voice.
Just:
“Is this useful to me right now?”
If the answer isn’t obvious in seconds, you’re invisible.
The smarter you are, the worse your messaging tends to be.
Because smart people over-explain.
You want to show nuance.
You want to sound sophisticated.
You want people to “get the depth.”
So you say things like:
“We build holistic ecosystems.”
“Empowering the future of digital transformation.”
“Reimagining human potential through technology.”
These sentences sound impressive.
They say nothing.
Nobody wakes up thinking:
“God, I really need holistic ecosystems today.”
People wake up thinking:
I couldn't sleep
I need more customers
My back hurts
I’m broke
I’m stressed
I’m wasting time on stupid videos
Real problems. Concrete problems. Survival problems.
If your words don’t connect to those, you lose.
After working with enough founders, you start to see the same patterns repeat.
Different industries. Same errors.
When someone asks what you do, you say: “It’s kind of hard to explain…”
That sentence alone is a red flag.
If it’s hard to explain, it’s hard to buy.
Remember simple slogan "Clarity scales." Complexity doesn’t.
Look at Amazon.
Their site is ugly.
But you buy in seconds.
Why?
Because everything screams:
what it is
what it costs
whether it’s good
how fast it arrives
No poetry. No "hard to explain.” Just a few points to make it clear why you should buy.
And that clarity prints money.
Founders love options. — Customers don’t.
You want to be known for: (this could apply to me too!)
strategy
growth
brand
community
partnerships
content
AI
Web3
consulting
coaching
Your brain says: “We’re multi-dimensional.”
Their brain: “I don’t get it.”
You only get to own one thing.
Not three.
Not five.
One.
Because memory is limited. Ask yourself:
When you think of KFC, what comes to mind? — Chicken.
Not “fast casual operational excellence ecosystem.”
Just chicken.
Simple wins.
If you only do one thing after reading this, do this.
Write one sentence.
Not a manifesto.
Not a pitch deck.
One sentence.
Here’s the structure:
I help [specific person] solve [specific problem] so they can [specific outcome].
That’s it.
No cleverness allowed.
Examples:
I help founders clarify their messaging so they can grow revenue.
I help busy professionals sleep better so they wake up focused.
I help small creators monetize their audience without ads.
Boring?
Yes!
Effective?
Extremely!
Because it answers the only question people care about:
“What’s in it for me?”
There’s a reason movies hold your attention for two hours, but websites lose you in ten seconds.
Story.
Story turns off the brain’s “ignore” filter.
Because story mirrors how we think about life.
Every good story has the same structure:
A character wants something
They face a problem
They meet a guide
The guide gives them a plan
They succeed (or fail)
That’s every movie you love.
And it’s exactly how your business should be framed.
But most founders get this backwards.
They position themselves as the hero.
Wrong move.
You’re not the hero.
You’re the guide.
Your customer is the hero!
You’re Yoda, not Luke.
Gandalf, not Frodo.
People don’t pay heroes. They pay guides.
Because guides help them win.
That's how Donald Miller frames simple “what I can help you with” story in his Story Brand book:

Stop thinking:
“How do I explain my product?”
Start thinking:
“How do I reduce thinking for my customer?”
Marketing isn’t persuasion. It’s simplification.
You’re not trying to impress. You’re trying to remove friction.
Every extra sentence is friction.
Every abstraction is friction.
Every clever metaphor is friction.
Friction kills sales.
If your business feels stuck, here’s a simple reset you can do today.
Not theory. Execution exercise to test.
Explain what you do to a 12-year-old.
If they don’t understand instantly, rewrite.
Children are brutal clarity filters.
Adults are polite and pretend to understand.
Kids don’t.
Use that.
Not for final copy, for fixing your bloated message.
Your headline should not be inspirational.
It should be obvious.
Bad:
Empowering tomorrow’s possibilities
Good:
We help freelancers get clients without cold outreach
One makes you sound smart. The other makes you money.
Choose well.
If someone remembers only one sentence about you, what should it be?
Write it.
Now delete everything that doesn’t reinforce it.
Yes, it will feel uncomfortable. That’s normal.
Focus always feels like loss.
But it’s leverage.
I know all about it. Guilty as charged. Just check Lab2094.com.
The best brands are boring on purpose.
They repeat the same message for years.
Think:
Just do it
Eat more chicken
Clarify your message
Short. Memorable. Repeatable.
You want people finishing your sentences.
Not asking what you mean.
Here’s the part most founders won’t admit.
We avoid clarity because it feels… small and limiting!
We want to sound deep.
Sophisticated.
Multi-layered.
But customers don’t reward depth.
They reward usefulness.
Being simple isn’t dumbing down.
It’s respect.
It says: “I value your time enough to make this obvious.”
Clarity is empathy.
Confusion is ego.
Here’s the upside.
Once you understand this, you gain a huge edge.
Because most people refuse to simplify.
They hide behind jargon.
You won’t.
So you instantly stand out.
Not because you’re louder.
Because you’re clearer.
And clarity feels like trust.
Trust drives revenue.
When your message is clear:
conversations get shorter
sales calls get easier
referrals increase
hiring improves
partnerships click faster
Everything compounds.
Because people finally understand what to send your way.
If they can’t explain you, they can’t refer you.
And word of mouth dies.
Clarity fuels distribution.
Distribution fuels growth.
Distribution for ideas, products, art, …
Here’s the heuristic I use for every project I work with:
If someone lands on this page for 5 seconds,
can they say what we do?
If not, it’s broken.
No exceptions.
Your business probably doesn’t need:
a rebrand
a new logo
a prettier website
more features
It needs fewer words.
Sharper words.
More honest words.
Words that connect directly to survival and progress.
Because at the end of the day, buying is simple.
People pay for things that make their lives better.
It may be — Faster. Safer. Easier.
If you can say how you do that — clearly — you win.
If you can’t, you lose.
So don’t try to sound smart.
Sound useful.
That’s the game.
And it’s winnable in a single afternoon.
Stop playing the Hero: You are the Guide. Your customer is the Hero who needs to "win the day".
The Survival Association: If your product isn't clearly tied to the user's ability to survive or thrive, they won't buy it.
Clarity over Cleverness: "Cute" marketing is a luxury for those who like being poor. Use "survival soundbites" instead.
Repeat the Soundbite: Marketing is an exercise in memorization. Use short, repeatable soundbites until they stick.
The One-Page Habit: If it doesn't fit on one page (or one canvas), it’s too complicated to scale.
I hope this gave you some hints for clearer thinking about your brand message.
Till next time, let’s build better businesses!
Pete
PS: “My name is Pete (aka BFG), and I can help you fix your distribution.😉"
(see, I learned from my own article)
Connect with me:
- on Farcaster: https://warpcast.com/bfg
- on X: https://twitter.com/aka_BFG
- on TG: https://t.me/BrightFutureGuy
- and I recommend joining BuildBetter YouTube Channel (formerly Web3 Magic): https://www.youtube.com/@Web3MagicPod
I still have a LinkedIn in case you're that old.
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